FREE ESSAY ON GETTING TO THE READER

GETTING TO THE READER

We have read or heard many stories throughout our lives. We know that stories can vary in
purpose: They can either teach a moral lesson or entertain. Some stories interest us;
others do not. In order for a story to be interesting, it must be told in a way that does
not bore or confuse the reader. This story must have elements that attenuate to a central
purpose. These elements (setting, character, plot, point of view, symbol, theme, etc.)
forge the thoughts and ideas of the author. Joyce Carol Oates' "Stalking" tells the tale
of a young girl growing up in modern suburbia. "Stalking" is a critical review of modern
American society and shows the detrimental effects that it can have on a young child. The
main character in this story is stalking the "Invisible Adversary", who is the
personification of the neglect that she has received in her life. In order to send this
message to the reader, Oates emphasizes the point of view of the main character, plot,
and setting in her short story "Stalking".
The narrator of "Stalking" is omniscient as she follows the main character, Gretchen,
throughout a city. She shows us that Gretchen is anti-social: "If forced, she takes part
in games (Oates 162)" and "she just stands around, her face empty, her arms crossed and
her shoulders a little slumped (162)". We also see that Gretchen is oblivious: "Gretchen
waits until [traffic] is nearly clear...a single car is approaching." (Oates 161) and she
plods "through a jumbled, bulldozed field of mud and thistles and debris that is mainly
rocks and chunks of glass" (162). Although the narrator visually guides us on this
journey, she also lets us into the mind of Gretchen - we see things from Gretchen's point
of view. Thoughts of "I'll get you (Oates 
161)...Out of my way...You'll be sorry for that..."(162) shows us that Gretchen is angry
and spiteful. Her anger and spitefulness are directed towards her "Invisible Adversary" -
an imaginary playmate that she has created. 
Why is she angry, anti-social, and spiteful? Why is she stalking the "Invisible
Adversary"? The linear plot quickly builds in this story and answers our questions at the
end. As the "Invisible Adversary" leads Gretchen from place to place around town,
Gretchen continues to shows us her audacious behavior everywhere she goes. In one
afternoon, she knocks over a garbage can, steals, vandalizes a restroom, and ruins a
dress. Her reckless attitude is further shown when the narrator describes Gretchen's
appearance. She is "stocky" and "could be good at gym, if she bothered " (Oates 162).
There is also a bit of irony and contradiction when the narrator describes her face. "She
has untidy, curly hair...eyebrows heavy and dark...a stern, staring look, like an adult
man"(Oates 164). "Her nose is perfectly formed...her face is attractive" (Oates 165). We
now know that she was not born unattractive; she chooses to be unattractive. A precursor
for the explanation of Getchen's behavior is when she does not acknowledge her mother at
the mall. That moment in the story indicates that Gretchen feels some resentment towards
her mother. We later find out why she resents them - "Her mother is probably still
shopping, her father is out of town for the weekend" (Oates 166). Gretchen's parents
neglect her. She fills the void in her life, created by her parents' neglect, by creating
an "Invisible Adversary". Of course, she is angered by their neglect and therefore is
angry with the "Invisible Adversary".
Oates places this story in modern suburban America (no later than 1972). Without this
setting the story does not have much meaning. Gretchen's parents' neglect is caused by
the leisure of modern America. Gretchen is raised in a "big white colonial home (Oates
166)" where her mother is engrossed in shopping and her father is out on a business or
fishing trip. Even though she is raised in a house of comfort and privilege, she is
unhappy with her life. Not even the material objects in a nearby shopping mall can please
her. In fact, she defiles anything that represents privilege and comfort, including her
white boots, lipstick, toothpaste, a dress, her home, and herself. The narrator
constantly reminds us where we are; where this story is taking place. She makes note of
the Pace & Fichbach Building, Buckingham Mall, Federal Savings Bank, Cunningham Drug
Store. The "Invisible Adversary" is always seeking refuge within these places. He just
doesn't go into a mall, or by a bank, or into a drug store. No, he goes into the
Buckingham Mall, by the Federal Savings Bank, and into Cunningham Drug Store. Gretchen
hates the "Invisible Adversary", follows him into these places, and brings her hatred
along. Gretchen disrespects these American icons not only because the "Invisible
Adversary" hides in them, but also because her parents' neglect hides in them too. 
Joyce Carol Oates uses three elements in her story "Stalking": point of view, plot, and
setting. We see this world from the narrator's and main character's point of view to
better understand the main character: Gretchen is angry, spiteful, and anti-social. Oates
sets up a simple, but interesting, plot to anchor our attention to the main character's
problem: Gretchen stalks the "Invisible Adversary" and we want to know why. And Oates
places us in a setting that is directly related to Gretchen's problems: The American
culture leads to Gretchen's parents' neglect of her; Gretchen's parent's neglect leads to
the manifestation of "The Invisible Adversary". Oates effectively uses these three
elements to allow us understand the underlining point of this story.